Analysis of A world of the visionless



Enclosed with the blinded,

were they the people with no hopes?

Or were they given a blindfold,

to close their vision to lose their contour?

Having a vicinity of the same forms,

still walking on the wrong roads.

Was it a separate world with people who can't see,

or was it ours,

screened by manipulated tropes?

Having no vision of their own,

breathing like the ancestral clowns,

leading a path with

no real rectitude of its own.

Is it our apathy,

or what we're shown?
Can we escape the matrix to build ourselves,
or are we entering another with a similar theory?
Are we making the world better,
or are we blindfolding more by inculcating the same ideology?
Why are we focusing on improving it for the next generation,
while focusing on our personal growth?
When all we're doing is being selfish,
just like the old posh;
Leading a path like the blindfolded,
renovating the roadside stands,
to outshine our different paths,
forgetting that what we're leading,
is just another route,
built by the old hands...


Scheme A B X X X X C X B D X X D C DXCXCXXXXAEXXXE
Poetic Form
Metre 011010 01010111 1011001 111101111 10001001011 1101011 110101110111 11110 1101001 10110111 10100101 10011 1110111 1110100 1111 110101011001 1111000101010010 11100110 1111111010100 11110010101101010 11001101001 1111011010 11011 10011010 100011 11101001 01011110 110101 11011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,026
Words 219
Sentences 10
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 15
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

The world we live in is perhaps full of people of every kind. However, the common ground stands still, we all are running after the same goal, maybe in different ways, and say that it is different, even though it is nothing but the upgraded way to do the same.

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Submitted by groupofthree7 on November 09, 2024

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