Analysis of End of disloyal time



Dusk thrashed into my house silently,
I discover myself like a sultry black spirit
my affinity and loved ones are sprinting away,
in whose house I have turned lights on,
those I thought of as my own, yet I believe,
but they plundered me of my altruism and reliance.

Whoever dreams as like and flouts the dream
deceive entity, secretly,
have no virtue of morality!
Nothing compares to the depths of the sea,
my philanthropy was much more profound for you.
As your desired modest friend,
thousands of years I shall compose
lustrous phrases for you.

I had nothing to crave, and you will err the ultimate verity of transience.
One day, you will be melancholy like the clouds,
but my abode will illuminate,
and millions of luminous stars will gleam upon their reunion.
The iniquity of remorse awaits you
You will remember the depth of your amiss
as time passes, inevitably between light and darkness.

The clock will change at the end of disloyal time.


Scheme ABXXXC XAAADXXD CXBXDXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 110111100 101011010110 1010001111001 01111111 11111111101 11101111000010 0101110101 01100100 111010100 1001101101 101001110111 11010101 10111101 101011 111011011101001001100 11111100101 110110100 0101100111011010 00100101011 11010011101 111001000011010 011110110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 952
Words 186
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 8, 7, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 190
Words per stanza (avg) 42

About this poem

This poem reflects a journey from betrayal to self-realization, as the speaker endures the pain of lost trust and deep-seated disappointment, ultimately finding solace in the enduring strength of their own integrity and resilience through the passage of time.

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Submitted by Farukahmedroni on November 11, 2024

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Faruk Ahmed Roni

Faruk Ahmed Roni is a contemporary poet known for his evocative and thought-provoking verse that captures the intricacies of human emotion and social issues. Writing in both language including Bengali and English. Roni’s poetry explores themes of love, identity, and the cultural heritage, often highlighting the resilience and inner lives of everyday people. His work resonates with readers for its lyrical quality and ability to address universal themes through a deeply personal lens. Over the years, Roni has garnered a dedicated following and recognition in literary circles, contributing to anthologies and literary magazines. His poems continue to inspire a sense of introspection and connection, solidifying his place in modern literature. more…

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