Analysis of A Terrible Sequel Of Pain and Suffering




A terrible sequel of pain and suffering,
A story that no one would ever dare to read,
For it speaks of agony and endless buffering,
Of a life that's shattered and in desperate need.
The beginning is not one of hope or love,
But of darkness and a haunting despair,
A protagonist broken and lost in the shove,
Of a cruel world that seems not to care.
Her name is Lily, a delicate flower,
Once full of life, now withered and weak,
Her spirit crushed by an invisible power,
That turns her existence into a bleak streak.
She wanders the streets with no destination,
Her eyes glazed over, her heart aching sore,
The weight of her pain a heavy imposition,
Dragging her down to the depths of the core.
Her days are filled with endless sorrow,
And her nights, a nightmare that never ends,
She prays for a better tomorrow,
But it seems the universe never bends.
Once she had a family, a home to call hers,
But fate had other plans, cruel and unkind,
They were taken from her, no time for goodbyes,
Leaving her alone to face the harsh grind.
She weeps for them, her tears never cease,
For their memory is all that she has left,
In her mind, she keeps the pieces,
Of their love, their laughter, and every little theft.
But even in her darkest hour,
Lily holds on to a glimmer of faith,
That one day she'll find her power,
To rise above this terrible fate.
Amidst the chaos and the pain,
A light appears in the form of a stranger,
A kind soul who sees her, not in vain,
But as a human being, no longer in danger.
He offers her a hand and a warm embrace,
And Lily's heart begins to flutter,
Her tears now replaced with a smile on her face,
For the first time, she feels a little better.
He becomes her guide, her rock, her friend,
And slowly, she learns to trust and believe,
That the pain she once thought would never end,
Can be overcome if she's willing to receive.
Their days are spent in simple bliss,
With laughter and joy filling the air,
For in his arms, she finds her peace,
And a love that's beyond compare.
But life is never a fairytale,
And every happy moment comes with a cost,
For the pain that once seemed to pale,
Now returns with force, and all hope is lost.
In a cruel twist of fate, her love is taken,
Leaving Lily once again all alone,
Her heart shattered, her spirit shaken,
A part of her lost, never to be shown.
The world seems to crumble beneath her feet,
As she drowns in the sea of despair,
But then she remembers her love so sweet,
And finds the strength to carry on, to repair.
She knows he would want her to be strong,
To not give up even in the face of pain,
And so she rises, though it feels all wrong,
For in her heart, his love will forever remain.
With each passing day, Lily grows,
Stronger and wiser, with a heart of gold,
Her pain, a badge she proudly shows,
For it's a reminder of a love that will never grow old.
And though her journey is far from over,
Lily knows she'll never be the same,
For in the depths of pain, she found her power,
And her story will never be just a game.
So here's the sequel of pain and suffering,
A story of a love that never dies,
For in the face of darkness, there is always something,
A glimmer of hope that forever lies.

Authorship by Mr. Dashaun Rashod Snipes
© Mr. Dashaun Rashod Snipes
® A Terrible Sequel Of Pain and Suffering


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,295
Words 712
Sentences 22
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 76, 3
Lines Amount 79
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,269
Words per stanza (avg) 316
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Written on November 23, 2024

Submitted by Mr.Dashaun_Snipes11 on November 23, 2024

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