Analysis of crystal



Coming to my parlor take a seat if you dare.
Let me enter your life with no remorse or despair.
 make you feel like a new person you see
I can give you raw energy,  energy you need.
The power I can give you the way I can make you feel.
You'll do just about anything to get me beg, borrow or steal
The amping tweaking speeding high that I give.
 You'll feel like you need me everyday for you to live.
It doesn't take much at first to get you going.
Just one small line to get the blood flowing.
Now you can do what was said that can't be done.
The work of 10 men and then some isn't this fun.
Eat me drink me smoke me if you want to be sane.
But if you really want to feel my powers you must shoot me in your veins.
Now I got you hooked my powers you cannot defeat.
Chemically depended on they say that's why you can't sleep.
But who are they to say do you really care?
Just snort another line if you dare.
But now I got you hooked you better not run out.
Because if you do you will crash for days without a doubt.
So get your rear and hear my friend better find me now.
before you go insane you better find me some how.
Your fuse is real short you're like a time bomb ready to ignite.
I really don't care what's going to happen to your family tonight.
Anything they say won't be right in your mind.
Because I'm not there you'll scream and yell and you won't be kind.
 Your head will start spinning won't be able to stay awake.
As your eyes grow heavy your mind gets cloudy and your hands start to shake.
There's only one thing on your mind and that's where my going to get my next line.
There are very few people who can escape my immortal touch.
These very few people just don't use me as much.
I'm called different names that you see crystal meth crank smack ice or speed.
I will change your life what you see. I will make you some chasing afternoon.
Needing hurting the line cheating it all comes with the addiction my friend.
Shout out so called friends depending on me as you near the end.
Zoning out everyday. Shadow people are here to stay.
Free your mind and free your soul or paranoia will take it     s toll.
Not eating or caring are some of the things I will give to you.
I can make you fly high or I can make you lazy too.
I can change your personality for the worst.
Your friends and family will tire from your outburst.
I will turn you into a lowlife flunky.
Shooting, banging, injecting into your veins now you're a true junkie.
The brain is fried the well has run dry.
 Frustrated and confused you start to cry.
You sit wondering what the hell you're going to do.
So you start hitting on this empty tube.
Your family and friends will fade from view.
But you won't see this because you have a different crew.
A crew of lowlifes thieves crooks and cooks
 But you won't see this because you want the cooks recipe book.
With this one thing on your mind all your possessions you've collected over the years disappear in time.
one cook, two cook, three cook, four.
Now you have the recipe book you won't be poor no more.
But now it's the beginning of the end for you my friend.
Black red and ephedrine starting to blend.
The monkey is on your back, While your pockets fill with Jack.
Greed condemns your soul while the evidence seems to grow.
There are pigs in your backyard eagles in the sky the Heat is in your kitchen waiting for you to arrive.
The law finally gets you. They throw you to the floor.
so you want to break the law hey son. Well not any more.
Handcuffed locked up sitting in your cell
You're thinking how all of this started that led you straight to hell
So come into my parlor take a seat if you dare.
I showed you what I would do to you if you entered into my life.
So think twice my friend before you snort that first line. Because I am telling you your soul will become mine.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101110101111 1110111101101 1111011011 1111110010011 01011110111111 11101101111111 0110101111 1111111011111 110111111110 1111110110 11111111111 01110111011 111111111111 111101111101111011 1111111011001 10001011111111 11111111101 110101111 111111110111 01111111110101 1111011110111 0111011101111 111111101110101 110111101101110001 1011111011 01111110101111 11111011101101 11111011110011111 1101111101111011111 1110110110110101 110110111111 11100111110111111 11111111111111001 101001101111001011 111110101111101 1011011101111 1110111101011111 1101101110111111 11111111111101 11110100101 110100110111 111101011 10100100111110110 011101111 100011111 1110010111011 1111011101 1100011111 11111011101001 01111101 111110111011001 111111111010101010010101 1111111 11101001111111 11100101011111 1100101011 01011111110111 1011110100111 1110111000101101101011101 0110011111101 11111011111101 11110011 110111110111111 1101110101111 11111111111100111 1111101111110111101111011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 3,806
Words 808
Sentences 66
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 66
Lines Amount 66
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 2,948
Words per stanza (avg) 753
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Written on November 26, 2024

Submitted by danab.04208 on November 26, 2024

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