Analysis of DARK-GREEN ( truth is “black inked green colour” -truth has a green vase, truth has a craze ancestor



I will try .. try and try till I achieve something I call just
Bearing in mind, it is always there for me to say “ I can only try” , in slow first, then fast,
this is all try, in hope so, remove-gusty.
So, main ☝️ ☝️ one?
If entities of the time can persuade leaders to stick in “joint destruction”,
I am decided to persuade leaders instead to be for “ construction “ ......
Productive technology, with the core  “societies in action “ after action ..
Good scene to be .. ideas beings to materialize, deliver innovation.
Try and try...
All this is about try, try ..
consider the limit, then think, possible  fly,
Known  fact is  “ it will only be the “space” no one will touch the sky.
Try the tried...my trial.....
The try is to sound and resound
                  The “ say “....
easing - all - atrocities - to cease...fire ...
to mean -  air - sounding ...
an - eye - opening,
great - one that remarkable,
the quote common...of this time
BASTA, that is it!...
“Excitement is building “,
 what then?... write-written-that-tells all..
repeating it- this quote ...
buried to leave, behind ..
ill - spirit....
at bay to be spectres,
innocence (offspring) (missing-actress), basics are automatic - ideas
generated that way..
free now, free Palestine,..this means...
ready already, and paved broader WAY.


Scheme ABCDDDDDEEEEFGHIJJFKLJMNOLHPHQH
Poetic Form
Metre 111101110110111 1001111111111110101111 11110110110 111 1100101101101101010 11101011001111010 010010010101000101010 11110101010100010010 101 1110111 010010111001 1111110101111101 10110 0111101 01 10101001110 11110 11100 1110100 01111 10111 010110 11110111 010111 101101 110 11111 10011010101010010 10011 11111 1001001101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,344
Words 251
Sentences 27
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 31
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 913
Words per stanza (avg) 235

About this poem

The poem is all about “ persuade, persuade!, Persuade now before it gets too late to reverse the outcome. Please be persuaded you “the executors” the prime owners of these mighty weapons not to let these disgraced, current leaders of Isreal own and use these weapons against innocence. Whether innocent world to listen or not, the Israeli leaders at the moment, as is clear already, has a plan, cursed one!, to charge innocent kids to achieve their insatiable “security “ ( which is impossible and nonexistent) to call it “achieved”. The base of this insatiable “secure” desire is that it has a deep rooted resentment of the past. Please tell these entities “ let’s us live secured life, satiated, justice at the core, so that the planet can treat its tenants accordingly. Please leaders-( those who are convinced to execute satanic agenda of the agitators of Middle East, please stop trapping yourself, particularly the innocent kids in the name, and at the demand help of these ruthless, yet rascal beyond belief - current leaders of Israel, please stop, and it is time to think “ DARK-GREEN”. ( GCoGS). This is going to mean that Great Colour of Global South. aka- dark-green. This poem again is all about try and try babe your best having in mind that “trying is never danger”. The poem, first, is going to give credit to the powerful and emotive I consider the best quote of the year. This emotive quote always cracks me up, takes me back to the place I was born and raised, the neighbourhood called “ haz-haz” (Asmera). A nostalgic quote which reminded the great singer of the time “ the departed, instructor Al-Amin Abdulatif- the song is “ Dehan kuni” which means “ be well”, and the song reflects saying “ even though that I feel sad to see you demolished, my happiness, excitement is building, ... The quote is still here in the streets of the city I reside and live, I call home, “ WINNIPEG, Manitoba, Canada. Every time I pass by these streets, I am lucky to get a flash, a flash which has more than a meaning. ( thanks “ gateway construction “), for this quote “ excitement is building “. So let’s take a moment and reflect considering the excitement of building, and persuade ourselves saying “ we have a secured life to live with excitement ahead of us, justice at its core. If not tell, ask these entities to reconsider and revise their definition of “ security “. 

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Submitted by Muler123 on December 11, 2024

Modified by Muler123 on January 01, 2025

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