Analysis of Careful



Better be careful

Rushing into anything
Can end up in a big sting
From a bee you may have thought
Was a fan of honey and had a life sought

Remember to replay the phrase
“Patience is virtue”
It’s a lesson of constant use

Why does life rush?
Why do we rush?
Do we not understand that patience,
Patience is for the ones with the most sense

Time moves quickly

Any chance you’ve got-
To stop time,
Do it.

Kiss, love and cherish today
And be patient, as the wise say


Scheme X AABB XXX CCXX X XXX DD
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 100110 1110011 1011111 10111001011 01010101 10110 10101101 1111 1111 11101110 1011011011 1110 10111 111 11 1101001 01101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 475
Words 103
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 3, 4, 1, 3, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

This poem reflects on humanity, and it's urged to rush. It empowers the idea of slowing down.

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Written on November 01, 2023

Submitted by somethingaboutmary on February 03, 2025

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