Analysis of Some Say I’m A Lousy Cook (Bussokusekika)



Some Say I’m A Lousy Cook (Bussokusekika)

Here’s a happy thought
Next year I may be sixty
Retirement's nice
Some say Meals On Wheels is good
I’ve grown weary of cooking
Some say I’m a lousy cook

Edwin Ray Tanguma aka Dagesh 2/16/2025


Scheme A XXXXAA X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101011 10101 1111110 0101 1111111 1110110 1110101 101010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 243
Words 45
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

Have a wonderful rest of your evening and to those who are still up until dawn…Play nice and hopefully ya’ll may enjoy a good meal…In a way it’s nice being back in touch with my boy and wife but my daughter must get her stubbornness from me…Even though they are not the three whom I believe I must convince or find…If Abraham couldn’t find 10 I doubt I can find 3 and besides I haven’t a clue as to where on Earth my inkhorn may bee…

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Written on February 16, 2025

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on February 17, 2025

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