Analysis of Waiting in Autumn



Singing sparrows on an autumn tree
Waiting for none, but for thee

Adornment of the seasoned bolls
It's the season of murmuring souls

In bits and pieces, In dribs and drabs
Liketh being eaten by nightly crabs

Quotes and poems, breath o blunder
Writing about you was always a wonder

Agree not to me but to this season
This lavender is on fire for a reason


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 101011101 1011111 01010101 101011001 010100101 110101101 10101110 1001111010 0111111110 110011101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 357
Words 70
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

"Waiting in Autumn" is a reflective and melancholic poem that captures the essence of longing and change. Through vivid imagery of autumn’s beauty and mystery, it weaves themes of waiting, memories, and unspoken emotions. The poem’s lyrical flow and evocative metaphors create a dreamlike atmosphere, inviting the reader to feel the quiet yearning within the season’s embrace.

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Written on January 12, 2021

Submitted by nedim_ahmed on February 18, 2025

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Nedim Ahmed

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