Analysis of So There's This Man...



How can the man be so worried about me,
When he's the one that's
About to leave?
You think a closed door will scare me? I'm well aware you turn into Jack at midnight.
But I continue to knock, to bang,
Even rang the bell,
How can you not tell?
I'm not the one that's afraid of happiness,
I saw the concrete,
I ran and jumped,
I always stand for what I want.
But next to my feet,
I stand and wait,
Hoping he won't leave the spot next to me,
Empty for until it's too late.
If nothing else,
You should know one thing,
It was never the boy,
For the girl...
Me...
I'm the one that ran 2 minutes too late.


Scheme ABCDEFFGHIJHKAKLMNOAK
Poetic Form
Metre 11011110011 11011 0111 1101111111011101111 110101111 10101 11111 11011011100 11001 1101 1111111 11111 1101 1011101111 10101111 1101 11111 111001 101 1 101111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 602
Words 142
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 442
Words per stanza (avg) 123

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To the boy who grew into the man of my dreams

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Written on March 09, 2025

Submitted by Unnamed19s on March 09, 2025

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Stephanie Patuleia

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