Analysis of Come Home



Hardly containable
Pain disappears-
Are these years interchangeable?
Soon you'll be here

Are you near?
I still feel you
Your message is clear.
Over distances
Memory-shifting the sphere.

Feel it lifting the light
Past the shadow outside...
When the darkness decides
There is no need to hide.

I'm aware of this feeling,
I have been here before.
Puzzle pieces keep changing,
It means so much more.

There's this something
Inside me,
It's hard to explain...
Tangled words into memories
that make me insane.

All along, I've been dreaming.
In my dreams...Sylver, Blu...
It was all in my hands
Now it's all coming true.

So in higher harmonics
& resonant tones...
Feel the densities deepen,
As my babies come home.


Scheme AXAX BCBXB XDXD EFEF EXGXG EAXC XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101 101 1110100 1111 111 1111 11011 10100 1001001 111001 10111 10101 111111 1011110 111101 1010110 11111 1110 011 11101 10101100 11101 1011110 0111 111011 111101 1010010 1001 1010010 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 676
Words 120
Sentences 16
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by shantell_b on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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