Analysis of Ego



come in, she says, i think of mice...
to trap and strap and strip and tap
weigh in, she says, I pay, and dearly
I think of seeking for advice through lines of lies
and are you there, o brother, to save me from this demon...?

uncomfortable red in corners of her eyes
don't chide, we all have points of weakness
kiss here, she says, I think of cries, enjoyment
not without a splash of sickness

a fly for spider, a snake for mr. hawk
a bit of bitter bites the beat
apply for outsider, fake and mock!
the synergies of life - sour, never sweet

I am to serve, I'm yours I say
she's says for I's there is a price
the boom of doom, no black or white, but only greys
i gave so much, but more and more she craves...

some say, we are the same, but one controls the other, always...


Scheme AXXBX BCXC XDXD XAAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111 11010101 101111010 111101011111 01111101111110 010001010101 111111110 11111111010 10101110 01110011101 01110101 011010101 01001110101 11111111 11111101 011111111101 1111110111 11110111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 753
Words 155
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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