Analysis of From Up Above HP'S Challenge (second try)



I met him when I was nine.
We were childhood friends.
I was shy but he was so very kind.
We would play ball and he would let me win.
We grew together this fellow and I.
And when I was sixteen I married this guy.
We had two children a boy and a girl.
I was his universe and he was my world.
And then one cold December day,
death came and tried to take this love away.
It's been fifteen years now my true love.
and still my greatest love is loving me
from up above.


Scheme ABCDEEFGHHIJI
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1011 1111111101 1111011111 1101011001 01110111011 1111001001 1111001111 01110101 1101111101 110111111 0111011101 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 457
Words 99
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 353
Words per stanza (avg) 98
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Submitted on August 15, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Michelle Angel

I have been writing since the age of 9 or 10. I love to write. It is my passion and has helped me through some of the most difficult times of my life. I write for the joy of it. My faith and my family is the inspiration behind many of my poems. more…

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