Analysis of In The Wilderness



Curls of freedom drift upwards as love sighs
her rhythmical language into cool minds,
prestidigitation roams coloured eyes
while somersaults catch laughter's breath in winds.
Apple turnover sensuality
licks at furious fine complexity,
visionary wisps slip across her moans,
casually fuelled sight enters soft groans;
rivers of sexual simplicity.

Seductive undertones reflect fresh light,
they glisten on imagination's tongue
while blue poetic sculptures I recite,
vanity's ache is no longer high-strung
as performance juggles delicious scent,
there's a choir I'm sure is Heaven-sent
for billows of splendour are pure power;
trapped within folds of our gorgeous flavour.

Wondrous personalities in romance
flicker flames of purpose through wild promise,
luscious presence swoons under warm fragrance,
musicality fractures the chorus,
there's a beautiful melody in dreams,
I plunder anticipation's fortress,
and release into her wonderful screams.

Relaxation stumbles before our fire,
shivered senses explode below bright bliss,
this plucked string night's flow will never retire
as intensity wraps tones in our kiss,
sprinkle speckles of universal care
into the dance of lovers in the air.

Silence pushes up against our soaked skin,
in the wilderness of white satin sheets
we crawl through the magnificence of sin
while our spirits capture athletic feats.

Sleep washes over us with rippled hues,
our storm's finished for now, we've paid our dues.


Scheme ABABCCDDC EFEFGGHH XIXIJIJ HKHKLL MNMN OO
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110111 01100111 000101101 11011101 101010 1110010100 100110101 10001011011 1011000100 010100111 110111 1101010101 11111011 1010100101 1010111101 110111110 1011110101 100100001 1011101110 1010110110 010010010 1010010001 110110 0010101001 01010011010 1010010111 1111111001 10100110101 10110101 0101110001 10101011011 0010011101 1110111 11010100101 1101011101 101101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,409
Words 216
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 9, 8, 7, 6, 4, 2
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on August 25, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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