Analysis of Loose Change



In vanity we squandered all our magic moments
(subway singers singing subway songs,
the doors opening as we step to the elevator,
your name on a random cafe sign);
they all seemed like loose change on the street:
dispensable, inevitable, a symbol of some greater fortune.
Not to be bent for, and dusted, and kept,
not to be saved for a rainy day,
not be put in the porcelain doll we got at the fair,
so that when it's broken,
it would not be in vain.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIFJ
Poetic Form
Metre 01001101101010 1101011 0110011110100 111010011 111111101 010001000010111010 1111101001 111110101 11100100111101 111110 111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 440
Words 86
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 348
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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