Analysis of Pizza, Burgers And Fries (Toucha, Toucha, Touch Me spoof from The Rocky Horror Picture Show)



She was feeling thin...
She thought she lost her wind
she only tripped once before...
you mean she's a... model?
She thought there's no use getting
into sizes twos and fours
it only leads to trouble and seam tearing...
now all she wants to know... is how to flow
she's tasted the spotlight and wants more
(more more more)
The runway gave no resistance
her heels can take the distance
She's got a meal to catch
she needs an assistant
feed her, feed her, feed her...
she wants to go hungry
pizzas, burgers and fries
purging of the night
than if her hips grows
while she poses
they'll get her into rehab
and that's just one small step
to recovery
she needs to have a friendly smile
and to be attractive...
feed her, feed her, feed her
she wants to go hungry
pizzas, burgers and fries
purging of the night...
feed her, feed her, feed her
she wants to go hungry
pizzas, burgers and fries
purging of the night...
OH.. feed her, feed her, feed her
she wants to go hungry
pizzas, burgers and fries
purging of the night...
purging of the night...
purging of the night...
purging of the night...
purging of the night...
purging of the night...
purging of the night...
purging of the night...
purging of the night...

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Scheme xxaxbxbxaaccxxDEFGxxxxexxDEFGDEFGdEFGGGGGGGGG x
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 111101 1101101 111010 1111110 0110101 11011100110 1111111111 11001011 111 0111010 0111010 110111 111010 101010 111110 101001 10101 11011 1110 1100100 011111 1010 11110101 011010 101010 111110 101001 10101 101010 111110 101001 10101 1101010 111110 101001 10101 10101 10101 10101 10101 10101 10101 10101 10101 11100101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,203
Words 228
Sentences 24
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 45, 1
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 469
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Submitted on December 16, 2016

Modified on April 26, 2023

1:10 min read
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'Ray Raynor

I have six passions in life... my spouse Richard, our extended family Glo and Jay our two children, (cats), Midnite and Willow and poetry. Sometimes... in my poems... they are very dark... 99% of the time... I am not feeling the way my poems portray... moreover, the dark... depressing and cheating ones... or killing... is not me. I love creative writing... putting myself in other's shoes... if this is really possible. My spouse and I, are in a nature based faith and residing in San Jose, California. Thank you... for all of the responses... this teaches me something new about writing techniques and greatly appreciate your input. If you are personally attacking me over the poems ... get to know me first please... I am on Facebook. I Love using "..." this is for pausing or breathing... I use this for easier reading. Thank you for taking your time out to review my poems... So mote it be and many blessings. more…

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