Analysis of Pompous Display



Stark words in convinced display, seamlessly well defined
they like to make a lot of sense from way deep within
where the substance appears solid and fully blessed
but behind the fashionable bricked and cool facade
they, in fact, may cover up a sucking emptiness.

The heart shielded and shut with utter pretense,
fearing its treasures might be stealthily taken,
will end up with nothing, for not opening,
its richness sums up to a bleak defense,
like the boosts of stocks, value faking.

By staying stinted and not permissive
the core dries out and falls apart.
Fulfillment needs a giving start.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1100101100101 1111011111101 101001100101 1010100010101 1011101010100 01100111001 1011011110 11111011100 1101110101 101111010 110101010 01110101 01010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 582
Words 101
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 3
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Modified by ludy_b on April 26, 2021

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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