Analysis of so many desires



I listen to your pain that doesn't seem to end
But I also notice you are starting to change within
trying new things and getting drunk and writing poems
lol been there done that just like having a toy
I hear you crave for penis
and wanting its seed upon you
but its up to you where the seed is planted right
just like a spoiled brat that I am I have my way until the end
the end being when we both commit to each other
making another one of us and maybe its brother
but not to fast we have to make it last
after all this isn't lust its love right?


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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 536
Words 114
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 431
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Submitted on April 19, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shawn Daniels

I am a man of various skills and sick and twisted minds.....yes minds... 800 dimensions I see things in and I like to become things............ only a portion of what I write is about personal experiences. The other portion is my mind inventing things up.. I may look at something and become that object and describe to you how it feels???? If you dare come enter the twisted and intellectual mind of me ...A.K.A " SuperShawn" I guarantee you once you learn how I see things you will too....Scary thought HUH!!!!!! muahhahahahahaah I do write A lot of haiku as well there short and to the point so dont judge me unless you know what haiku is! follow me on Twitter more…

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