Analysis of Still there, or gone?!



The love is still there,
But the fun is gone.
It is simply not fair
To love you alone.

The love is still there,
But your innocence is gone.
I simply can't bare
The path you put me on.

Your body is Still there,
But your heart is far gone
I know you may actually care
But our chances were blown

Our dreams are still there
Even if the hope is gone
I love you, but shouldn't dare
wish for a newer dawn


Scheme Abac Abab abac abab
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 10111 111011 11101 01111 1110011 11011 011111 110111 111111 11111001 1101001 101111 1010111 1111101 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 382
Words 83
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on February 05, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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