Analysis of The Red Ridges LXIII



It's okay, we are going to reward you well
For all the good works you have done for us
But you would do us a favour and invest here
That our taxes may not fly and immigrate there

It's okay we are going to make amends here
For all the commissions and omissions we have made
For the experiments that are inconclusive and deferred
For the weeping goodness that must be augmented

Let us say a laptop for every child is good
Let us say a home theater for every family is fair
Let us say a cellphone for every adult is fine
But then a car for everybody must answer a question

You are a joy to watch and a token of entertainment
You are a bundle of knowledge and a package of information
You are a teacher in a classroom of social networks
You are a preacher in the committee of nations

You are a good citizen and ambassador of good faith
You are the guardian of principles and policies
You are the undertaker of the law and true justice
You are the genius of order, correction, improvement and progress


Scheme XABC BXXX XCXD XDXX XXAA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111010111 1101111111 11111010011 110101110101 11111011011 1100100010111 100100110010001 101010111010 111011100111 11101100110010011 11101011000111 11011100110010 11011100101010 1101011000101010 110100011101 1101000010110 110110000100111 11010011000100 1101001010110 1101011001001001
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 977
Words 192
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Tochukwu Esq

Tochukwu Callistus Ipere is a contemporary Nigerian Poet born in Enugu. Tochukwu is a native of Ideato North in Imo State, South East Nigeria. Tochukwu was educated at the University of Nigeria, Nsukka and the Chartered Institute of Administration, CIA where he qualified as an Associate, (ACIA) in Corporate Administration and Finance in 2011. He currently has four publications (all collections of poems)to his credit, The Creeping Fire Of Hope SGS,IMT Enugu ,1999, Dance Of The Golden Baby, Delta Enugu 2000, Get The Way and Dignity, Madonna University Press Enugu 2011 and Xlibris Publishing Corporation USA 2011.Tochukwu Ipere has won many awards as a poet these include: 1. The International Poet Of Merit Award 2001. 2. National Judge/Advocate of poems @ website http://www.poets.com 2005. 3. International Poetry Achievement Award 2007. 4. Editor's Choice Poetry Awards 2006,2007,2008. 5. International Who's Who Golden Poet Award 2007.6.International Poetic Ambassador to the International Society of Poets 2007.Tochukwu was an executive member of the Association of Nigerian Authors ANA Enugu State chapter from 1999 to 2003. He is active online and the founder of a Causes page called Support African Poetry. He has a Post Graduate Degree in Education PGDE with the National Teachers Institute NTI Kaduna. He is currently studying for a masters degree in Educational Administration in the National Open University of Nigeria(NOUN). He has interest in music and is a song writer. Tochukwu has up to 800 poems to his credit.[edit] References Ipere, T.C(2011) Get The Way, Enugu: Madonna University Press Profile on Lulu.poetry Ipere, T.C(1999) The Creeping Fire Of Hope, Enugu: School of General Studies, Institute of Management and Technology Ipere, T.C(2000) Dance Of The Golden Baby, Enugu: Delta Publications more…

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