Analysis of Whispers



Piercing whispers like
Acrid mice; scurrying with
Tiny claws, snatching onto
Scraps of spotlight, then
Staggering into cracks and
Crevices that blemish the walls
When bedroom lights ignite.
Whispers that echo behind
Closed doors and under covers.

Are we really who we
Think we are?

Laughter, not that of the soul
But that of the mind so
Dark and outraged floods the
Room; cackling from a tongue
Dipped in acid, or perhaps
In the juices of an apple
Most forbidden.

Unreliable truths beckon
Relentless vanity.

We don't know
And still we whisper.


Scheme XXXXXXXXX AB XCAXXXD DA CB
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1011001 1011010 1111 1000110 10011001 11101 1011001 1101010 111011 111 1011101 111011 10110 1100101 1010101 00101110 1100 0100110 010100 111 01110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 522
Words 92
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 9, 2, 7, 2, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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eric khong.

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