Analysis of Your Loss, My Gain
Hate, Despair, Regret, and Sorrow.
I know now, there is no tomorrow.
Life has ruined me and so has society.
My life is not your responsibility.
You try to control me, you deceive me.
You are killing me, can you not see?
You have dealt me too much pain.
However, you will learn...
Your loss, my gain.
Your lives are damned to hell.
You lie far too well.
"You can't do anything right."
What a lie! I am forced to carry out YOUR decisions, alright?!
No more shall I listen to anyone.
No more shall I do unto everyone
As they will not do unto me.
Damn you all! You're all too heartless & selfish to see,
This pain & suffering caused by you, called "Misery".
Good luck getting into the "Promised Land."
It doesn't exist...
You're not allowed to enter due to your lies.
The only promise you will get is a dreadful good-bye.
I hate you, I hate society, I hate life.
If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't have this strife.
You will regret...
Being born, regret treating me as you did.
Because you are going to love feeling miserable,
Feeling my hate, my anger, my misery, my pain, my sadness, my depression, my regret, my sorrow.
You will dread what you have done to raise my rage to a level unimaginable.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101010 11111101 111010110100 1111100100 1110111011 111011111 1111111 10111 1111 111111 11111 111101 101111110110101 111110110 111111010 11111101 111111101011 111001111100 1110010101 11001 11011101111 01010111101011 111110100111 111011110111 1101 10101101111 01111011101000 10111101100111101010101110 11111111111101001000 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,164 |
Words | 227 |
Sentences | 28 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 5, 4, 5, 4, 7 |
Lines Amount | 29 |
Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 149 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 38 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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