Be with me forever



I'll miss you when the sun shines
I'll miss you when the stars are high
I know you were strong,
I know you were never wrong,
I know you were brave,
I know you hate being a slave.
 I'll remember those eyes that shine in the dark,
I'll forever miss that spark!

I'll remember that tale which you waged every time you saw me,
That made me a million times happier and smile with glee!!
I'll remember feeding you from my hand,
And I'll always remember the conversations between us which we both only understand!!
Now, who would be there to welcome me on the door,
By just laying on the floor !!

Now who would listen to my useless talks
Now, who would be there with me for the rest of the walk!!

About this poem

It's about my dog whom I love the most and I never wanted to loose him but destiny took us apart

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Written on August 07, 2021

Submitted by asthasingh1616 on August 07, 2021

Modified on March 12, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAABBCC DDEEFF XX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 674
Words 133
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 2

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