Young Man



Young man is sad
young man follows same trial again and again
young man looks exhausted,
terrible and sometimes strange
Het get lost in hallucination between serving city lights,
young man tries to change the trail but
cannot erase past footsteps.
I see,
Young man easily slips into the dark abyss wants to ask for help to admire his nest, but his admiration does not admires him and he don't expect anyone anyone
he seems just a scared kid
sometimes restless adult and
sometimes a teenager limbo,
young man wanders between spinning sky
and creates distress seeds into his nervous system
alluring crystals
gets chest pain and
disperse
collection of atoms falls apart and
young man becomes ashes of dead stars
then,
gets classy thing called sadness
drives high
whining urge to dispatch
eradicate remnants
young man turns, runs, burns behind and beyond.

About this poem

I wrote this poem when I was in low Kind of nostalgic

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Written on July 16, 2021

Submitted on August 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHICJKLMNJOJPBQLRST
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 831
Words 143
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

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