THE VISIT



It felt so good to see your face,
 With you came a little peace in this chaotic place.
 
     Your silent yet your presence is noticed by all,
  As you approach me GOOSEBUMPS my flesh begins to crawl.
 
        I'm taking back your close your so near,
  I can't believe your standing in front of me your here.
 
   I'm hoping you don't pick up on the excitement I feel,  I learned that I have nerves of steel.
 
       You’re smiling and seem to be at ease
 I'm holding my breath saying breathe, breathe, breathe.
 
       When your gone I process and think it went well,
 I'm wondering what you think with you it's hard to tell.
 
  Then you sent a text and some pics that made my day, I was a little worried I did not want to chase you away.
 
      A friend said you handled that and I'm proud of you,
  I wasn't sure how I would react no one knew.
 
      No reason to be Angry, Prideful, or Unkind,
 Thank You for bringing peace of mind!!!!!
                                                                                              
                    TURBO1904 9/12/2021

About this poem

This one is about seeing your ex lover after a year of being separated. The relationship lasted for 10 years. I will never get over this one....

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Written on September 01, 2021

Submitted by Turbo1904 on October 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AA BB XX X XX CC X DD EE
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,058
Words 175
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2

Debra K Middaugh (AKA turbo1904)

 · 1963 · San Diego, CA.

58 years old. Native San Diegan. Lesbian and living the dream. I write poems to release the pressures of life. It aides in my sanity levels. No professional or educational experience. more…

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