Bliss and a half



Bliss and a half

Bliss and a half.
Bliss what’s bliss?
Bliss is amusement itself.
Hovering over white fluffy clouds
Lets just say in the sky
A mile away from the gods
Bliss.
Sovereign rule over the earth
The sand. Rocks. Trees. Mountains.
The earth its self
Shaking. Dancing to my tune.
Yes this is bliss
Glory. Joy. no! this is bliss
After I’m shattered down to earth
Lungs. Liver. Kidneys
Crying out
Help us. No help me
Bliss
The sky is so high up
I can’t reach the clouds
Far from the gods
I’ve met my old friend.
Pain.
Bliss.
I hardly find anything amusing
My world, taken from me
My wold
Mine
I’m king
Arms pierced beyond recognition
No! I’m king. I’m supreme.
One more ride
Bliss
Are you?
I’m burning up. I'm dying
Bliss
 Is this the way out
I’m going out with a smile
Call me luffy
I’ll go out a king
Bliss this is no bliss
Its bliss and a half
Far from the heavens
Sealing’s in the way
One more should do the trick
I’m king.  
The sky is calling for me.
This beeping machine is hindering
The sweet voices of kings and gods
They call for me.
Hush. Hush
This is the last ride.
I can’t breathe no more
Into eternal bliss I go
This can’t be bliss
Its bliss and a half

Y.S

About this poem

Its a poem about addiction. It potrays how a person dealing with addiction feels and the end results of the addiction. (Drugs)

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Written on August 15, 2022

Submitted by yaziseyama2 on August 16, 2022

Modified on March 31, 2023

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Scheme A AbcdxeBfgcxbbfxhiBxdexxBjixxJxxkBxjBhxajbAgxxJijeixkxxbA
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,209
Words 253
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 56

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