Broken girl



I look in the mirror trying to see what others see...
After the fog clears, I only see, me...
A broken girl the world forgot Leaning down, tears streaming I ask forget-me-not  
Let this pain not go in vain
After the storm and rain, is the way I feel still going to remain?
Traveling in circles, lost in a daze,
Forgetting myself, my mind's a haze...
Puff after puff and all the passion ignites,
It's not real, it's not me
A broken girl,
Such beauty inside,
That no one got to see...

About this poem

This is about my journey to self discovery. Learning how to separate survival me from the person i am in my heart of hearts.

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Written on February 14, 2020

Submitted by tabookitten13 on August 10, 2022

Modified on March 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABCCDDEAFGA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 492
Words 103
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

Misty naquin

Orginally from Louisiana but have lived in many places. In my 30 years I have done a lot and have seen a lot. I have PTSD and have survived abuse, and have always made a way to survive. Always openly choose to see the good in the world and others. Writer and artist. more…

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