AT 18 YEARS YOUNG
AT 18 YEARS YOUNG
Rain drops falling, uh huh those are my tears,
Some tears rolling, down my face is my fears.
My heart broken, I've just had my place taken,
My pride taken, by someone with a better ace token.
This hitting me, Hard! Hard! Hard!
Pain mocking me, Haha! haha! haha!
Oh oh by the way, that's me at 18 years young,
Luck! Away from my way, pain only by my heart sung.
I look at me and I see a blind kid in adversity with truth,
I look at me and I see a kid so obsessed over Ruth.
In Alert I bark at me, How? How? How?
How did I forsake me, Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!
You deserve the best, and pride attached to your chest, I scream at me.
I picked up my luggage one after another to search for a better nest.
About this poem
It is a love poem that reflects teen love, whose helplessly fallen in love but unfortunately having his heart broken.
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Written on September 27, 2022
Submitted by mchilapyaflute on September 26, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | A BB CC XD AA EE DX XX |
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 740 |
Words | 170 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
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