Clearly Blurred



Twilight 
Full of hidden plights 
A-wishing for somethin' bright 
Pushin' all their might... 

Starry 
Pinned for attention 
Across the sky flowery 
Winned for relenting... 

Empty 
Starved for sympathy 
Carved dimples, no qualities 
Robbed duality... 

Darkness, 
Heart drops in starkness 
Darts tossed out with awkwardness 
Shooting pains in mess... 

Blackened 
Anger attacking 
A depressing impression 
Getting worst, slacking... 

Brooding 
Soft clouds un-soothing
Dwellin' deep seated feelings 
Our faith, peeling…

About this poem

It’s a semi-haiku that parallels the night theme & depression/mental health. I wrote it back in my college days about 18-19 years ago.

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Submitted by babbina on September 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAA CDCE CCBC BBBB XEDE EEBE
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 545
Words 80
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Kari Michele Chrichlow

 · 1983 · New York

I'm from NYC and have a daughter who is a creative soul like me. I like to sing, write and rest in my spirituality. more…

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    Wow
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    I love it.
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