The girl with a dream



Days and nights are raining of words
From her heavy heart shattered in this world
Asking help for the unknown
For a friend to all is said to be a friend to none
And she's the one

Her smiles show bitterness and brokenness
Where the sun frowns upon
Thy all the pieces patterned
As if they are puzzled ones

She cries herself night and day
Praying for something better tomorrow
'cause she lives in dead-end palace
Whereas hopes and dreams are gone
Beautiful structures with no colors
"How lovely it is to be gone"
As she whispered on her reflection

Dear Unknown
How many days, months, years and centuries will it take
For as long as I live I fear not to dream

It brings comfort and peace
As I shall myself to sleep
I'll wake up with the mysteries
I have been seeing in my dreams

About this poem

This is about a girl who lives a place with no color, torn between giving up and holding on.

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Written on September 27, 2022

Submitted by Christine15sario on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBCC AXXX XXXDXDC BXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 779
Words 152
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 7, 3, 4

Christine T. Sario

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