Afternoon conversation



Mother,
do you know a spider sometimes eats its own web / eating its own home walls alone
I know            when you are hungry you are ready to eat anything around you /
Loneliness / a name / a home.

And, do you know a fish can feel pain too like us? I would say like a daughter / & the fear in gills. It knows how it feels to have a hook in the eye / a foreign thing in the eye / to be in the net /  to be in the wrong hands.

And, butterflies do not have teeth / maybe God doesn't want them to chew and taste grief / they have tongues to swallow

Mother
sometimes
I wish I were a butterfly without teeth / who wouldn't have to chew any grief / or bitter taste /  in her whole life span.

About this poem

The poem depicts the mother-daughter relationship. The daughter is revealing her sadness through different living things to make her mother understand more vividly.

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Submitted on October 12, 2022

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Zaynab

 · 1996 · Karachi

Zaynab Ali is a self taught poet, she believes her passion for poetry is natural as she has always been keen toward reading and writing poetry. She thinks any form of writing is an authentic way of self expression. For her, poetry is the only way to communicate with grief, love, loss, death and loneliness. more…

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