Zzzzz...



These days...
Does a listening to one thing,
Repeated over and over again.
Make the truth of it,
More interesting to validate.
Convincingly?

When does a truth told become pointless.
To anyone left to be concerned?
About what truth is to care less.
Or what it means to keep believed?
Heard to hear addressed.
Afterall...
Aren't lies to tell them these days,
More creative?
More imaginative and innovative?
With an attention given quick.
Like a dog who is trained,
To fetch a thrown stick.

These days to hear,
Whatever it is important told?
Goes in one ear and out the other.
As if both ears have been glued closed.
Truth?
Seldom has the power,
For anyone to prioritize it tried...
To keep both ears and eyes opened.
At least to keep anyone awake!
Doesn't it seem that way?

I said...
Doesn't it seem today,
That truth heard to hear it told...
Seldom has the power,
To keep anyone AWAKE!

'Zzzzz...'

Uh...hello!
EXCUSE ME!'

'OH...
I apologize.
Were you speaking to me?
I was meditating.'

Snoring?
With your eyes closed drooling?
And your head nodding back and forth.
As if your neck is about to break off?
Come on.
A child can make a better excuse than that.

'That's how deep my meditations take me.
Seriously.
And that's the truth!.
What was it that I missed?
Or you assume I did.
I could have been praying.'

Praying?
For what?

'Have you ever sat,
Listening to a college professor?
Or a sermon preached.
With a beginning to write notes.
Then fall to sleep?'

So...
You do admit it.
You were sleeping?

'No.
Meditating.
There is a difference.
Meditating helps loosen tightened muscles!
With a power to make anyone forget,
Being stressed out unnecessarily.'
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Written on October 15, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on October 15, 2022

Modified by lpahtillah on October 15, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abxcxd xxxxxxaeefxf xghxiHxxjk xkgHj dd lxdb bbxxxm ddixxb bm mhxxx lcb lbxxxd
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,662
Words 372
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 6, 12, 10, 5, 2, 4, 6, 6, 2, 5, 3, 6

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2 Comments
  • lpahtillah
    Hi, Pruett1023...I must admit this, anytime I hear someone say, "Seriously, I am telling the truth honestly." Something inside me has me turn my head away. Then look up at the sky to ask myself why a truth claimed to say it needs is in need to be followed by saying 'honestly'! My truth to feel it known does not have to have anyone attempting to convince me of it. Thanks again for your comment. I once had a friend who would say honestly to me everytime I knew and felt he was B.S'ing. 
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • Pruett1023
    I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.
    LikeReply2 months ago

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