Holding on to Death



Although the church is mostly dead
There are still a few alive
And if they’ll strengthen what remains
Perhaps they will survive

God will preserve a remnant
Just the way He’s always done
A few without stains on their clothes
The way they had begun

But most of them won’t wake up
Till their meal is on their plate
And grief will overcome them
When they taste the things, they ate

The murder and the envy
And the anger and the strife
They chose to hold these deep inside
Instead of choosing life
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Written on July 10, 2009

Submitted by dawg4jesus on October 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 501
Words 96
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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