going x



I dived into your brown eyes
a portal for your soul
A virtual blueprint map of you
a broken compass in hand
inter-winding roads
An omen of what’s to come

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This how I go out tonight
More skin
More time
To share my piece
to give you peace
to overcome
To see you exhausted
giving up the ghost
It’s okay, everyone has one
i just need yours

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I Navigate the lost path
On the last frontier
a lake for a beautiful drowning
Uncharted territory
To a place I dreamt
in a cabin
In that room I long to be
I Waite for you there alone
On my living room floor
where the X lies

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the want and wait

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Written on November 30, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on January 10, 2023

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXXB XXXCCBXXDX XXXEXDEXXA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 602
Words 139
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 10, 10

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