A Man from Wichita
I once met a man from Wichita.
While driving down the country
road. Not knowing what time it
was I was driving for hours. Felt
the beating of the sun on my
shoulders.
Saw a him on the side of the
road and pulled over.
Rolled down the window.
Swatting away bees like flies.
Wiping his sweat with his handkerchief.
Talking to himself. Sure feels like
summer I can smell grandpa's
barbecue. Phew! It's gonna be a
hot one.
Fanning himself with his wicker
hat. Looking at him. He was three
shades tanned with blisters in his
hands. His eyes were squinted sun
kissed by the sun.
Wrinkles upon his face. A striped
long shirt, rusty pants and suspenders
with a pair of worn down soles.
Reaches into his left side pocket. Pulls
out his pocket watch. Might be just
in time for ma's lemonade down by
the sycamore tree.
You want to know a secret. He boasted
I got some moonshine. Its my grand daddy's
secret recipe. Pulls out a silver
flask from his shirt pocket. Yep good old
days. It had grooves and dents and one
single rose embedded. Shinning in the
glistening son across my face. Blinding
my eyes like a small flare.
Takes a sip and pauses and enjoys the
moment like a fine wine connoisseur
making his mustache curl. Putting
everything else in slow motion. Only
to savor the moment.
Asked him for directions. He just
simply said as he coughed. "All you
have to do is go forward "but, before
you go take one sip with me. Please
do me that favor. Oh! By the way my
name is Ian Murrel.
Handing me his sliver flask tightening
his suspenders prompted back on his
tractor. Took me a moment to work-up
my courage. He just stared. Smelled like
licorice.
Not to be so rude I took a sip. Burned so
much down my throat as it settled. Made
my eyes water. Nodded and laughed.
That first sip will get yah.
Reminded him the first time he took his
first sip with his grandfather by his side.
Sitting on the porch steps coming back
from work. From working with my father in
the mines. Made my insides churn.
Looking back at me.
He began to Talk to me about the time
he went fishing with his dad.
Fished all day by that dock.
Not a single bite that autumn day.
Till it got dark and
began to rain. Smelled like honeydew.
Over that orchard. I tell you these
corn fields have their own story.
It made him only ponder. Paused. Took
a sip. Seeing his eyes widen and his
nostrils flare. Hands me back the flask.
I take a smaller sip. Just to feel the small
burn on my lips. Numbed for the moment.
I would just stare.
Remembered when he joined the armed
forces when he was eighteen. Had so
many restless nights.
Scars upon his right knee.
Scrap metal still embedded. Inside
titanium alloy. Shows it off like a
badge of honor.
Only hurts when I square dance as
he laughed and joked.
His spirits still intact.
Looks back at his pocket watch.
Squints to see. Looks up at the sky
Well you look at the time. Sorry young
lad I just start talking and keep on
yapping.
He chuckled! It's a habit. Listen hear
son all you have to do is go down
this road. Make a right down by
Miller's creek.
When you reach the end you will see
a sign to Sedgwick county.
It will take you back to the open
road but, before you go take my
silver flask. It's the least I can do.
I was baffled for the moment .
Not sure what to do. Look back.
He just simply said.
My way for making up for lost
time.
And, To say thank you, thank you for
stopping by. Listening to this
old man share his stories.
It's not every day we get a new
stranger in these parts. It's a custom
to give away a special keep sake.
Plus you got some home made
moonshine with you.
Now it's getting late you
should get going.
I walked back to my car feeling
overwhelmed and a bit of gratitude.
Opened the door and closed it.
Catching myself in the moment. I
simply smiled.
Looked through the rear-view mirror.
Watching him wipe his sweat off with
his arm.
Starting the engine he simply took
his hat off. Seeing his silver fox curls
for the first time and
his rigid beard. He bid me a farewell.
Walked to the middle of the road as
he shouted.
Be humble lad. Be humble.
Driving away his silhouette began to
shrink until, he simply faded.
I looked back and he was gone.
Drove back to the same spot and
he was no where to be seen.
Walked over to the sycamore tree.
Found some initials carved in the
tree. I,M 48. My skin turned pale and
my eyes were befaled.
A sudden shiver went down my
back and I couldn't understand.
Made it back to the car.
Turning the head lights while it
got dark. Drove back to the city.
Till this day I have that silver flask
inside my glove box. Smell of
licorice when I open.
All this when I made a wrong turn
and I met a man from Wichita.
Ian Murrel. A gentle soul.
-Ax.barajas-
About this poem
I wrote this from a dream I had. Sometimes I feel like I have lived separate life times. When I write I like to take people on a little journey.
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Written on March 01, 2023
Submitted by Ax.barajas on March 01, 2023
Modified by Ax.barajas on March 15, 2023
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