Blank sublime



Pity me.
For on pity grows attentiveness.
I attend to your whim.
To a point.
Pity me.

For I know you.

Love me.
For on your love grows affection.
I attend to your body.
For a while.
Love me.

For I know you.

Hate me.
For on hate grows sorrow.
I listen to your woes.
Until they are forgotten.
Hate me.

For I know you.
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Written on March 09, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 09, 2023

Modified on March 13, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AxxxA B AcaxA B AxxcA B
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 319
Words 87
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 1, 5, 1, 5, 1

Heather Lydia Thornhill

 · 1981 · Manchester

In 2017 i published Moods and mindsets poetry..and went from there. more…

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