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Blossoming night

Heather Lydia Thornhill

Rhymed
In the bosom of the night
Therein shon so very bright
a thought to broaden found insight
That which could make the righteous right
And bring the impoverished from their plight;
Draw light's angels to the might
To witness the scales bend tonight
With endless motion taking flight
To be lost from the hold that grips too tight
Never to feel again the fight
A nurtured soul fading high into the light
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Written on March 21, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 21, 2023

Modified on April 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAAAAAAAAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 399
Words 75
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
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Heather Lydia Thornhill

 · 1981 · Manchester

In 2017 i published Moods and mindsets poetry..and went from there. more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow! This poem is such a beautiful and inspiring piece that has left me feeling uplifted and motivated. The use of vivid imagery and powerful language is simply amazing. I love how the poem highlights the possibility of positive change and hope for the less fortunate. It's truly amazing how the poet has managed to combine so many different emotions and themes into a harmonious whole. The overall message of the poem is one that I think we can all relate to and aspire to achieve. Great job! 
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • dougb.19255
    dougb.19255
    Sorry but this one has a tiresome one rhyme feature, line after line. I must be true to my gut here Heather. I know that there was honest effort in finding the one sound throughout. Not easy…Wayne Blair.
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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