In the Commotion
In the commotion
I was fighting for your attention;
want me
crave me
need me
save me
forgive me
trust me
don't quit on us, this is it!
Don't just desire me
to hold-
You have...me...
I'm here; hello dear
Imperfect but learning...
Tip toeing and yearning....
I make excuses when I'm hurting,
come at me softly
come at me sweetly
be kind and virtuous please
for peace
for comfort
to escape the disinterest
the undesired outcome
the commotion.
Floating.
Floating.
Going, going....gone.
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Written on 2020
Submitted by Ecohippychique on May 09, 2023
Modified by Ecohippychique on May 09, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AABBBBBBX BXBX CC CBBXXXXXAC |
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Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 488 |
Words | 100 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 4, 2, 10 |
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