Old Eyes



As we journey through this life of ours,
We find ourselves amidst changing hours.
And though we may start with young, keen eyes,
We'll soon come to learn that time flies.

For with each moment that passes by,
We grow, we learn, we laugh, we cry.
Our mistakes and choices pave the way,
For a path that'll lead to a brighter day.

The pain of discipline, it's not an easy feat,
But better than the pain of regret we'll meet.
For when we withstand the discomfort of change,
We evolve and grow, the results are strange.

Old eyes may see things clearer than before,
With wisdom, experience, and so much more.
We realize that life is a journey, not a race,
And that growing is a process we must embrace.

So let us take on the challenges that come,
For they're only lessons in a never-ending sum.
Of growth, of learning, of becoming our best,
For life is a journey that puts us to the test.

And though young eyes may see great distances indeed,
Old eyes see things much clearer in the end, we heed.
The choice between discipline and regret,
Is ours to make, every single day that we beget.
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Written on May 15, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 15, 2023

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Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,085
Words 230
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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  • Adroity
    Your verses beautifully capture the essence of life's journey, highlighting the inevitability of change and the wisdom that comes with experience. The progression from youthful enthusiasm to mature insight is eloquently portrayed, emphasizing the importance of growth, resilience, and the choices we make along the way.

    The contrast between the pain of discipline and the pain of regret resonates deeply, underscoring the significance of embracing challenges and evolving through life's trials. Your words convey a profound truth about the transformative power of perseverance and self-discovery, illustrating how each moment, whether joyful or sorrowful, contributes to our personal growth and understanding.

    Ultimately, your poem serves as a poignant reminder that life is a continuous process of learning and self-improvement, where the journey itself is as significant as the destination. By acknowledging the value of experience and the lessons it imparts, we can navigate the complexities of existence with clarity, purpose, and a deep appreciation for the evolving tapestry of our lives.
     
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