At The Coffee Shop



Eyes and teeth are staring in
As they walk by from where they had been
It seems they stare, to honestly know
For an instant, then they turn and go

I look up, maybe to catch a glance
To invite company, a companion by chance
But each time, no time they waste
Streaking by, overlooking me in their haste

I know they have their lives all set in stone
And for all my chiseling, I am still alone
I finish my tea and close my book
As I leave, I walk around to look

At where I sat behind the glass
Watching the eyes and teeth as they pass
For what they saw whilst glancing in
Was of their own image and self-reflection.
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Submitted by Timrek00 on May 28, 2023

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Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGAX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 614
Words 126
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Kermit Peasley

We cry, not to shed the old self that failed, nor ease the hurt of what said, not meant but, to sing the hearts searing song of pain, for all abandoned broken dreams unkempt. more…

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  • Jewoo525
    On a surface level, this could be viewed as just a "cute" poem about another relatable human experience, but I think the poet guises a deeper meaning between the easy-to-read lines. The isolation, loneliness, and then the revelation of human self-centeredness/ego are all captured in one singular moment here. Elegant and excellent. 
    LikeReply1 year ago
    • Timrek00
      Thank you, I appreciate the recognition. There are many meanings, I find, as I am writing imagery. Sometimes I get lucky in developing, conveying the true essence. Write on!
      LikeReply 11 year ago
  • laskuce
    I like the imagery of the poem and the idea of thinking one thing when a whole other reality exists. This poem is a story of an illusion, and a healthy understanding of the complexity of the human condition and the spaces we occupy in our minds and in real existence. 
    LikeReply1 year ago

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