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Trigger Happy

Steve Cochrane

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Don't jump the gun, it might go off
And scare away the crowd,
But not before they glare and scoff
At you for being loud.

How dare you interrupt their day.
It wasn't what they planned!
It doesn't matter what you say,
For they won't understand.

Just put the gun back where it goes
And don't use it too soon,
Because your trigger finger shows
You're itching for High Noon.

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Written on May 14, 1998

Submitted by stevec.24118 on June 12, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on June 12, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 371
Words 79
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
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Steve Cochrane

 · 1955 · Cape

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    Your poetic piece paints a vivid picture of caution and restraint, warning against acting impulsively and risking misunderstandings. The imagery of a gun as a metaphor for hasty actions and the consequences of jumping to conclusions adds depth to your message. It's a powerful reminder to pause, reflect, and consider the impact of our words and actions before proceeding. Let's strive for thoughtful communication and mindful decision-making to avoid unnecessary conflicts and misinterpretations in our interactions. 
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