Unfinished By Far



Its the feeling i get
when im with you,
so vibrant & thrilling,
so new

Its like the answer
to my prayers,
knowing that there is someone
who really does care

Someone for me
and all my flaws,
someone who keeps me
always in awe

Trying to explain this
is just a waste,
for its like trying to explain
how water tastes.

Its hard for me to show affection,
and I'm wondering how
someone could care
for such imperfection.

Please excuse me for being
a little more cautious,
its just my body & heart
feel a little bit nauseous.

About this poem

Finally finding THAT special someone.

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Written on November 26, 2020

Submitted by hernandezsnyderrt on June 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA XXCD EXEX XXXX CXDC BFXF
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 528
Words 118
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • Sho.zen
    Sho.zen
    Good job
    LikeReply16 days ago
  • Inactiveuser
    Inactiveuser
    Nice
    LikeReply18 days ago
  • delano
    Cool
    LikeReply1 month ago

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