Intrusive



Do not ignore unwanted thoughts
To make them go away.
Instead, you will need lots and lots
Of prayers every day!

You also need to soon replace
Unwanted thoughts with those
That aren't temptations you must face,
But are the ones you chose.

Subconsciously when you ignore
What you want to remove,
It reinforces more and more
And probably won't improve

The likelihood of happiness;
A goal when you aren't glad
Because the devil wants to mess
With reasons you aren't sad.

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Unwanted thoughts

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Written on July 24, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on July 24, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on July 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BCBC DEDE XFXF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 471
Words 91
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Steve Cochrane

 · 1955 · Cape

A poet since 1971 more…

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