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You have my heart

Charles Fields II

You hold the key
to take me where i most  
Would like to be.

When first you turn the key  
Although, i may seem slow to start,

but  
With a little tender-loving care,
once i do

You will find
an inner magical spark  

Which is yours,
will last almost forever  

Is reliable,
easy to maintain   

And
will not ever...

Break  

Your Heart

C2

 
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Written on December 05, 2008

Submitted by Charles2 on August 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXA AX XXX XX XB XX XB X
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 381
Words 96
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
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