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September 2/23 8:37 PM

Jaxon Hurst

I’m not good looking enough for her
no wonder she looks at him like that
I wish she was as happy to hear from me as I always am to hear from her
I wonder what would happen if I looked like him
maybe then I would be good enough
maybe if I was as good looking as him
she would want me like she wants him
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on September 02, 2023

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Scheme ABACDCC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 310
Words 73
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
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