She sat in the sun
She sat in the sun
turning it in her hands
pulsing heat turned comforting
cradling her like a baby
she remembered her fathers touch
holding her as a child
so close
yet so distant
the tears welled again
the suns kiss was warming
light glinting on the metal
shallow thoughts churning
she deserved a medal
not for being the strongest
or ever the best
but for she was retiring
being put to rest
barely lucid she turned
vision blackening by the minute
she felt but at peace
the battle was over
to others she had lost
or even given up
but in her mind she’d won
it had all been enough
her eyes passed over
the spotting on the couch
painful memories arising
she looked down and saw red
bathed in the liquid
she sat in the sun
wondering where life
had done her so wrong
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A poem about mental health struggle
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Submitted by ariellef.38607 on September 26, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | Axbx xxxxx bcbc xdbd xxxe xxax exbx xAxx |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 771 |
Words | 155 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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