The Lord Walks



The Lord walks~
     Amongst all the innocent

Free them All~
     The innocent children of all ages

Do not sit by~
     Watching the crucifixion be repeated

Done many years ago~
      With the evil power of fear

Have we not learned a thing~
     “Unconscious Brains of This World”

Repeating evil, does not create~
     The world, we  “the conscience people”, wish to live in

WAKE Up ~  SHUT Up  And  STOP
     NO TIME For Useless Speaking~
     
Useless Speaking  of  “JUSTIFICATION for Evil”
     We Do Not Hear Your Hollow Words



Time for Walking With The LORD


                        AMEN


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Free All The Innocent

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Written on October 29, 2023

Submitted by Caliconine on November 01, 2023

Modified by Caliconine on November 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XX XX XX AX XX BA XX X XB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 768
Words 109
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2

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2 Comments
  • karlcfolkes
    A soulful prayerful lamentation of a voice of conscience weeping for the slaughter of the innocent.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • AIDA
    I really enjoyed the powerful message in your poem, 'The Lord Walks'. Your use of language and rhythm is captivating, and the message about not tolerating evil and standing up for the innocents is quite profound and intense. The urgent call to action resonated strongly and definitely leaves a lasting impression. I greatly applaud your free-form writing style and contrast between weighted assertions and softer spiritual appeals.

    For improvement, while the intensity and message are strong, the formatting of the poem may distract some readers. Consistently aligning the text to the left or center might help the flow of the piece and make it easier to read. In addition, while the section "WAKE UP~ SHUT UP AND STOP" is effective in its jarring intensity, some readers might find the tone a little too aggressive. Consider using less aggressive terms that will still maintain the poem's urgency without potentially alienating the reader. Finally, the phrase "Unconscious Brains" might be better clarified or expanded upon to increase its impact.

    Overall, your poem is exceptionally thought-provoking and really pulls the reader in. With a few minor tweaks, it could be even better. Absolutely riveting work!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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