Only if...



When I die if I make it to Heaven
I hope God will listen to me
I'll ask to be forgiven
For writing intolerable poetry

I know my request is insignificant
There are greater sins bearing forgiveness
Maybe can or maybe can't
Even though I'm willing to confess

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Even after life requests make a difference.

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Written on November 14, 2023

Submitted on November 14, 2023

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Scheme ABAB XXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 256
Words 49
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4

JESUS BETANCOURT

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