Not Yet Black



Blackening, though not yet black,
there's still something that I lack:
a tiny crack letting light in
colors me alive, a sort of sin
against the vultures of the night.
In my sight, it's only right that I defend
this poor, makeshift frame 'til the end:
there might be hell or simply a spell
of boundless blackness on the other side,
so I might as well try my best and glide
like a young, smiling cloud; enjoy the ride.
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Written on December 16, 2023

Submitted by Prisma on December 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCDDEFFF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 417
Words 85
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

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