You make me want you



You make me want you
My every thought is you
I don't mind if i'm blue
You make me want you

Feeling you is feeling
You're all love, my everything
I'm not sure of your knowing
Feeling you is feeling

In your arms im in
I want us to begin
Holding naught within
In your arms I'm in

Take all that I take
Lead me as you break
Our love is no mistake
Take all that I take
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Written on January 02, 2024

Submitted by heathert.34240 on January 02, 2024

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Scheme AaaA BbbB cccc DddD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 367
Words 83
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Heather Lydia Thornhill

 · 1981 · Manchester

In 2017 i published Moods and mindsets poetry..and went from there. more…

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  • rcatron1963
    I really like how you expressed your feelings with this poem.
    LikeReply 110 months ago

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