Treacherous



The treacherous ones have dealt treacherously..

Their Twisting me to bits!

Women and children rule over us..

We are all in the pits.

Engulfed by evil

They say..

They say

They have the way??

Don't despair, we won't be there!

We are meeting him in the clouds..

Funny thing this thing called sin what's it all about?

Not about you and me..

It's plain to see..

(Ever growing snouts.)

The righteous judge don't hold a grudge...

But He knows what we are.

That I shall fly

And leave behind

Makes me a superstar!


All is vain..

To Him it's plain...

You have not received your birth.

When you do you will know it's true that He owns the earth.

Created to be inhabited.

It will receive new birth.

Deception is spun..
His Spirit will come...
To a remant from the church-

To show the way by everyday living what they learnt.

To have dominion to rule with Him

First you must be drawn in...

Yes  then on that day

When He returns to rule...

We will say

How did we stray

How could we be such fools.
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Written on January 29, 2024

Submitted by myway6119 on January 29, 2024

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